The number of screws there are isn’t depicted.
Possibly consider breaking this step down into three pictures with the actions specified for each connector as they each require a different way to un-clip (one might have tape while another doesn’t)
It is easier if the pictures are in the same orientation.
It is best to list the size of the screws as well as which screws, if all, need to be removed. Also, some screws are different sizes and that isn’t specified. The screwdriver is a Phillips, not a Flathead
The pick tool needs to be listed in the guide tool list.
Instructions mentioned using a Flathead screwdriver, but the screws are Phillips. A size 0 works for all the screws.
Possibly include the picture showing how you detach the screen from the keyboard at the beginning of the guide.
Be sure to link your guides in your troubleshooting page to the appropriate issue.
It isn’t indicated which piece is the charging port. Also, more details on how to use the soldering tool could be beneficial.
You might want to move step 11 into step 10 as it isn’t really showing you how to do anything.